Identify at least two errors, and describe what the errors are in one or two sentences.

Week 3, Discussion 1 :

Identifying Citation Problems in a Paragraph

This exercise is designed to help you with integrating sources into your own writing. This will help you as you prepare to write your four-source, six-source and multiple-source essays.

Here is what you will do:

Review the following short paragraph on a hypothetical paper about cybersecurity and the Internet of Things. Note that the writer has made some errors in his integration of Shindell as a source.

Identify at least two errors, and describe what the errors are in one or two sentences.

One potential method of hacking into a hospital’s records is through a wearable device. Often, wearable devices are used by health care institutions to monitor blood pressure or other health conditions. However, such devices expose vulnerabilities in the system.

(Shindell, 2018) argues that hackers increasingly integrate malware to infect such devices and then use them as foundations upon which to attack the health care institution’s IT systems. Specifically, Shindell, 2018, maintains that ransomware is especially pernicious.

“During an attack, victims will typically encounter a screen giving them directions for paying a ransom to retrieve their data…”  “More than half of hospitals surveyed were hit with ransomware in the previous 12 months.”

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