In the Manner of the poem Archaic Torso of Apollo, write a 14-line poem (a sonnet) with at least 10 syllables per line, it does NOT have to rhyme.

Here is the poem by Rainer Maria Rilke, 1875 – 1926

Archaic Torso of Apollo

We cannot know his legendary head
with eyes like ripening fruit. And yet his torso
is still suffused with brilliance from inside,
like a lamp, in which his gaze, now turned to low,

gleams in all its power. Otherwise
the curved breast could not dazzle you so, nor could
a smile run through the placid hips and thighs
to that dark center where procreation flared.

Otherwise this stone would seem defaced
beneath the translucent cascade of the shoulders
and would not glisten like a wild beast’s fur:

would not, from all the borders of itself,
burst like a star: for here there is no place
that does not see you. You must change your life.

In the Manner of the poem Archaic Torso of Apollo, write a 14-line poem (a sonnet) with at least 10 syllables per line, it does NOT have to rhyme.

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