Were there any places you were confused? Why? What can he/she do to fix those confusions? If you weren’t confused, what else would you like to see in this story? Are there any questions you’d like answered?

Complete these questions for at least two of your classmates’ essays. Answer in full sentences–give specifics! Peer review is important stuff! Follow these questions, and number your responses. That makes it easier for everyone to read. Each peer review will be worth 10 points, so the more specific and detailed you are, the more likely you are to get full credit here!

-Choose essays with the fewest number of posts to respond to. That way, you will help ensure everyone gets feedback.

What works well in this single story discussion and personal narrative? Give the writer a compliment!
1.Summarize the single story that this writer was addressing in his/her essay.
2.Comment on how the writer addresses Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie’s TED Talk in the context of his/her own single story.
3.Are there at least two quotes? Explain how the two components of this assignment could be fused together.
4.Comment on their use of a scene. Was there action and movement? Dialogue? Offer suggestions for how to improve the scene.
5.Were there any places you were confused? Why? What can he/she do to fix those confusions? If you weren’t confused, what else would you like to see in this story? Are there any questions you’d like answered?
6.What was your favorite line from this piece? Why?

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