American socialism
Description
the professor had some comments
would you be able to revise the paper with his suggestions.
**Consider MLA format
**Consider your title
**Consider your hook
**Review your thesis — include the three major points you’ll discuss
**Topic sentences should directly relate to your thesis
**Consider Pathos throughout — use sensory details to pull in your reader.
Provide an example of two quotations that you will use in your paper. Provide a commentary for each one and show how you will cite each parenthetically using MLA documentation style.
