Description
1. Describe concepts of holistic health and wellbeing that inform life choices, and have an impact on our physical, mental, social, cultural, spiritual and behavioural outcomes, across the life course.
2. Understand and apply the principles of health promotion, protection and improvement, whilst recognising the importance of prevention of ill health when engaging with individuals in a multicultural society.
3. Explore aspects of health policy, health literacy and health economics in line with the social, cultural and political landscape of healthcare provision.
Introduction 5/20No description of concepts of holistic health has been given.
L.O 1 has not been met. You have justified your choice of topic and substantiated this really well with links to government policy but this has been done further on in the presentation when it belonged here.
Main body 23/50Excellent overview of principles of health promotion. Very good clear and comprehensive rationale for the campaign on slide
3.There is a lot of focus on government policy, lots of good information here but two slides on this is too much, having one slide on this would have allowed space for you to include a conclusion slide which is currently missing form the presentation.
A good overview of existing health promotion resources relevant to your topic have been identified and supported by references, however there is no meaningful discussion about these in the narrative.There is no inclusion of multi – cultural aspects which I would have expected to see here.
Conclusion 5/20A whole slide for your conclusion would have been appropriate. Your suggestion around increasing availability of nutritious food an additional resource is a good one but is too brief.
Presentation 5/10
.Clear slides with text and graphics, narration matched slide content well, but did not offer much discussion. The order of the slides does not follow the order of the assignment brief.There is some very good content in this presentation but unfortunately Learning outcomes 1 and 3 have not been fully met.Further development:Re visit learning outcomes 1 and 3 and take note of the feedback given above prior to resubmission.”
im sending narration text below so you can see what its wrong what needs to be added.
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