In your revised essay above, highlight the transitions you used. Based on your highlighting, what can you do to improve your transitions? Do you need to: include transitions, use more advanced transitions, or revise some of your transitions in different ways?
Instructions: Copy and paste the following text into a document or create a document that contains the same information. Using your essay in response to the unit’s writing prompt, complete the following steps to improve your essay. Essay With Revisions 1. Insert your entire essay here. Include any revisions your instructor asked you to make. […]